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The room came gradually into focus. Sasha was still groggy from whatever she'd been drugged with. She could hear the pitter-patter of rain on the steel roof, far above, and the musty smell of mildew hung in the air.
The helpless wolf found herself seated with her legs out stretched before her. Her arms were tied over the chair's back and her ankles were bound to a stool. The foxes stood either side their victim, waiting for her to come around.
"Oh God, not you two!" Sasha shrieked. "Don't you remember who I am? Do you have any idea how much trouble you're in?"
"Oh, no, Detective," Wilber corrected her. "It's you who are in trouble!"
"We're both free," Walter explained, "and you are at our mercy!"
Sasha hadn't enjoyed her first run in with the Fox Brothers and she didn't think she was going to like this one any better. She had set out in her galoshes and long coat for a quick dash to the corner store. Instead, she was being held captive in a dreary old warehouse.
"I really must say," Walter began. "I'm a tad disappointed in you, Mrs. Wolf. The last time we met, as I recall, you had on a nice dress shirt and vest with tailored pants and, oh yes, those lovely leather boots…"
"Well, if I had known you were planning on kidnapping me, I would have worn something less stylish!"
"Ever the wit, aren't you?" Wilber muttered. "Maybe we should give you something to really laugh about!"
"What're you going to do? Tickle me?"
"Why yes, detective," the twins snickered. "It is, as you would say, part of our M.O."
"Gees! Keep your hands to yourself!"
"Come now, it's not like you're in a position to argue..."
"Come on! This is stupid! You two are such children!"
Sasha's words fell on deaf ears. The brothers took hold of her ankles to relieve her of her footwear. The latches came open, one by one, and off they came, leaving the wolf's stockinged paws tied to the foot stool. Their snouts disappeared inside the boots and they could be heard inhaling deeply.
"Oh, such a lovely scent!"
"Yes, yes, truly heavenly!"
Sasha sat watching as they exchanged her boots and sniffed, again, as if each paw smelt different. Maybe they did; she'd never checked…
"Oh, yours was much nicer, Willy!"
"Oh, think so, Wally?"
"Sure I do! What say you, Miss?" he asked, holding the boot inches from her snout.
Sasha turned her head away, trying not to cringe.
"Get out of my face!"
"Well, that's not very nice…"
"You know, you're only bringing this on yourself!"
"What sense does that make?" Sasha cried. "I didn't ask to be brought here! I didn't ask you to tie me up! I didn't as..."
Her words dribbled off as their cold noses rubbed up and down her lupine soles. She scrunched up her toes and bit her tongue to keep from laughing.
"They do smell pretty nice, Wally."
"Look, she's enjoying it, Willy!"
Sasha blushed around the ears. Aside from the fact that they had taken her against her will, the two weren't really giving her much to worry about. She hated to admit it, but she was almost having fun..."
"Just tell me what you want and let me go already! Maybe I won't even press charges! Wait, no! Stop!"
Sasha curled her toes as they lifted her heels, not quite ready to surrender her socks. The pair took each by the cuff and drew them slowly off, savoring every moment as the soft cotton slipped over her furry paws.
Stretching one between his hands, Willy rubbed his nose back and forth over the soft material. Wally scrunched his up and buried his face in it. The pair inhaled deeply, enjoying her scent.
"Heavenly!" cried Willy.
"Divine!" added Wally.
Sasha's blush only deepened. These weren't the type of compliments she was accustomed to receiving. As the foxes ran their noses up and down her now bare feet, she found it imposable to hold back. The chair shook beneath her as the room echoed with the sound of her rolling laughter.
"Please, stop! I can't take it!" she begged. "You're whiskers are so prickly! Please, please stop!"
They pulled their faces back and cradled her paws in their hands.
"She said please, Wilber!"
"I know, Walter, I'm as surprised as you."
Wilber got up and walked over to the guard rail overlooking the warehouse floor.
"We have information pertaining to Clara's case. As I said before, you can't get something for nothing. We really do want you to catch the one you hurt our friend."
"We're not bad guys," Walter chimed in. "We only brought you here so we could have a little fun and pass on what we know."
"Wally's going to keep on playing with your paws while I tell you what you need to know. If you can hear over your own racket, maybe you'll pick up a valuable bit of information; otherwise, I guess we'll just enjoy your company a little longer!"
"No wait! Please," Sasha begged. "No more! Please…"
But it was too late…
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Looks like Sasha’s really in trouble! Those ticklish toes of hers seem to have her at a disadvantage! Do you suppose those foxes actually know something? Could this be the tip she needs to crack the case? Find out in next week’s installment of THORN: Flashpoint!

At the time of its posting, this was the very last tickle themed story illustrated by Angel. Interestingly enough, it was the first one he drew. It took this long to finally work up a good enough story and I feel it fits rather nicely with how the chapters have progressed so far. We’ll be back on track with the usual case files again next week.

Walter "Wally" Fox, Wilber "Willy" Fox, and Sasha Wolf © Brandon Kosinski
Image © Angel Blanco
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J-Wolfe15 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
Nice story.
BlackthornPubl Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you!
J-Wolfe15 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
You're welcome.
lawman54 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012
Impressive story here, very nicely done!

BlackthornPubl Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you!
That's good of you to say.
JeffersonTJacobs Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011

I had actually seen this pic just last week, but was too lazy to go into readin the story behind it. I'm glad you directed me to it.

And, not to say you're predictable or anything, but just that from my years of training reading fics that involve tickle-perverts (like myself), I kinda saw this coming. X3
BlackthornPubl Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011  Professional Writer
At what point did you see it coming, though?
That is, in which chapter? It was my intention that the foxes show interest in Sasha during their interview so that this scene wouldn't come at you out of the blue, but if you knew right off that I had introduced them for just such a reason, then, perhaps, I'm being too obvious.
Keithsterling Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Let go to the get some snacks and stuff
let go to the get some snacks and stuff

Well I saw intermission, I was waiting for the dancing popcorn box and soda to go

it good intermission story...I liked good you used the fox brothers
BlackthornPubl Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011  Professional Writer
Thank you! I like to tie my stories together by reusing characters. It makes for a stronger continuity.
Keithsterling Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I understand....I do the same thing reuse character......but for me it, so I can move my characters to any time frame by simple changing the costume they wear.
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